Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Salacious Escapade

Here is my entry for this week's 100 Word Challenge which comes to us this week from AuroraLee. The word this week is GAME (which doesn't appear anywhere in my post this week). Enjoy!


That crisp November evening, they sat facing each other in a stark cement room. The sounds of silky black waves could be heard crashing against the wooden pier from inside the storage space. His hand felt inconceivably heavy as he raised it before his eyes. She stared breathlessly, her ears throbbing perversely with each click of the spinning cylinder. Their eyes met in the last moments before their act of collusion. His finger quickly slipped through the guard, finally resting sensually on the trigger. He placed the cool, metallic muzzle to his supple temple and was electrified as he squeezed.


4 comments:

  1. Oooooo, eerie! Very creepy, but very beautiful.

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  2. Wonderful description of Russian roulette. Gave me chills.

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  3. Ooooh! Gave me goosebumps. Like Tara said, wonderful description of a very creepy game!

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  4. Creepy! Very evocative, I could feel myself watching what as going on (even though I wanted to put my hands over my eyes).

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